
When I listen to Tell Tale Signs I imagine myself by the mighty Mississippi with it's Southern grace blowing wondrous thoughts around me. Dylan's brilliance inspired this poem.
Was she my river?
As I lay stranded on
my lowest tide
I felt the splashes
her wet sprayed kisses
as I walked along
her decadent pier
licking my lips
she spread her
hips and waved
me over, waiting
for me to take
a distant dive; I fell
instead felt her
wash me with
manicured hurricane
fingers pushing me
ashore. Levies
couldn’t help
me with this
pain that beat
inside her invisible
skin. She drowned
me with her le bon
ton rouled doubts.
salty tears stung
my red eyes
saw her drifting
starboard
towards another
left me kneeling
for one more
swim in our kisses
but she kept
on flowing
left me knowing
I could never
hold her closer, felt
her approaching
like southern rain
on my sunburned
skies, through my
arms I could taste
her but she vanished
left me shivering,
like an island
within the longing of
her starving shores.
AEC
2008






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That evoked a wonderful visual with every word...great work...