YOU CAN'T NOT GET NO SATISFACTION

When I'm not there

Posted about 1 year ago

When Im not there

to hold your face in my hands

Know that I am there

in your every breath

When Im not there

to whisper sounds of love in you ear

Know that I am there

and that we are not apart

When I am not there

to hear your anguished sigh

Know that I am there

Loving you with all my heart

Know that I am there


Comments (7)

  1. psuedomacabre says

    Beautiful, I love starting the day with a little poetry. A good forlorn black and white to go along with it.

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008
  2. Zen Raven says

    Thx, feeling kinda wistful here... it just seemed to fit...

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008
  3. psuedomacabre says

    I get it, Those are usually the days I reach for Japanese Whispers by the Cure and write a ton of stuff in my books.

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008
  4. Zen Raven says

    Yes well my faithful notebook is getting a pounding also and I am actually loving it... the words are coming out of my pores... and the feeling of release is monumental...thx

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008
  5. KoriLinc says

    ahhh.. I love it. Poetry/lyrics at its best. 

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008
  6. Nella Mia Anima says

    Talk about striking a chord.  1) That song melts my soul every time I hear it. 2) Your poem may just equal that song's melting ability.  Nice job.  A little heartache usually does my pen well too.  Cheers.

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008
  7. Zen Raven says

    Thanks heaps, I was having a moment of self indulgence on all levels... Only you is just one of those songs filed in my brain for just such times and I am glad I did it justice with my words... :-)

    Permalink posted 10/17/2008

Comment on this Post

Login using email and password below.

Forgot Password?

Don't have an account?
Join MOG. It's Free!

© 2006-2009 Mog Inc. All Rights Reserved